Tuesday, April 26, 2011

Week 3: April 18 - April 22, 2011

Week 3 RR? - Understanding my character(s)
(Be sure to include quote and page number!!)
You must use at LEAST 2 quotes from the book.Understanding your character is a good way for you to really get into your book and see from another person's perspective. In your response this week, describe your character. Think about and discuss:  -1. your main character's personality    - 2. how they act/behave  - 3. what they look like  - 4. how old they are  - 5 what sort of education do you think that they have  - 6 who their friends and family are    - 7 what their financial (money) situation is  - 8 and what their job is (if they have one).


     I am still reading The True Confessions of Charlotte Doyle by Avi. My main Character is Charlotte she is a really brave girl. She is really brave because a man said that she was ''as steady of a girl he ever met”this shows she is brave because when the man said this, Charlotte was climbing to the top of the ship were no one has been before pg.120 . Charlotte is a very happy girl she is always smiling at everyone she is nice, cheerful, and she asks a lot of questions. 
     
      I really like her personality she is curious about everything and she knows how to keep her promises .I know this because in pg.11 she said '' I did promise I will give him extra money" she doesn't forget her promises.If she did then they would of beaten the poor man that was asking for the extra money. I would like to have a friend like that. Although  she is a very fancy girl for a girl of 13 years old and I don't like fancy that much,she should also be playing with her friends instead of being locked up in a room on a ship.

    My character is not going to school right now,but she did.I know this because on pg.8 she said "being in a ship beats being in  Barrington school". I think that's like a rich school because her families financial in very good I know this because people call Charlotte "Miss Charlotte" like she is very important pg.7. Also because her parents are wealthy enough to have a boat and because when ever Charlotte orders something she gets it.

     She has never talked about her parents only her dad on pg.1 where his dad said " to keep a notebook to write her adventures in the ship"so she at least does something educational stuff in the trip. She doesn't have a job yet because she is 13 and I know she is 13 because it said it on page. 46.
      
      

2 comments:

  1. Yuritzi,

    Nice choice of quotes. Very interesting all the support you gave for her finacial situation. Good examples. you used a lot of support.

    Grade 6
    Next step: What does "stead girl" have to do with brave? Explain. What makes you think that her statemen about promises, means she keeps them? Use your background knowledge. Check for sentence fluency and punctuation (missing commas).

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  2. Much better. I like the support you gave to show what steady means and how she keeps her promises.

    Don't forget comma's after transition words (also).

    Grade 8 P

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